you

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    you
    You are more than awoman…..,
    cause all I do see is a star from heaven
    thy walk is like a melodious orchestra,
    with every single second mine heart yearns for thy words,
    a smile will lite the room in darkness,
    a touch from the tells a thousand and one stories of your affections,
    a kiss from thy lips is filled with poisons of passion and desires
    from it a thousand arrows do piece mind mind with fireworks
    You are that wish by mine side ,
    without thee mine heart do feel sad
    and mine mind is lost in your disappearance

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    mbui commented on you

    08-11-2009

    i love your words, they truely describe a woman true beauty.
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    magati

    08/12/2009

    thanks alot.....thats why they are the ones called the lord called BLESSED....

    candysears commented on you

    06-18-2009

    Beautiful write.. Make me want to fall in love all over again..Love it!! God Bless & Much Love My Friend In Poetry!!
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    magati

    06/19/2009

    thanks...it is nice to know afew words could rise love again....

    Barbs commented on you

    04-24-2009

    nice words Magati for a woman`s ears.
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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