You left me

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what can seem endless can be a new fresh begining.

You left me

You left me all a lone 
To face this world
I didn't know you never said
How much you loved me so

Rain mixed with tears fell on my face
The day you left
I did not understand
Why seemed to venture in
My tormented mine

I gave you my all
Every breath I took
My thoughts were of only you

When you left I found another
Who gave me his heart
For the first time life began

He gives me his all as I give him mine
When I think of you and why you left
I know not why it brought me happiness.

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Teardrops commented on You left me

03-16-2010

this is a awsome poem and yes love can be found again and you say it so beautiful thanks Marie

NevillePark commented on You left me

03-16-2010

Adventures in the land of loves lost and found with grass roots realism . Tailor made for a novella. .

Bettysrainbow48

03/16/2010

Thank you, sad but happiness in the end.

Tempy commented on You left me

03-14-2010

I gave you my all Every breath I took My thoughts were of only you When you left I found another Who gave me his heart For the first time life began these lines are my favourite. keep up the good work

Bettysrainbow48

03/16/2010

Thank you I appreciate your thoughts.

SavVySam commented on You left me

03-14-2010

"I gave you my all" That about says it all....You poured your heart out in this deeply reflective poem... I am happy it ended on an up note! Great job!

Bettysrainbow48 commented on You left me

03-13-2010

He had his qualities too but when stardom struck, it changed him..When he got around to realizing wanting me back, I found my soul mate and happiness.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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