I LOVE YOU

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    LOVE IS A VERY IMPORTANT WORD IN OUR DICTIONARY. IT CARRIES A POWERFUL TOUCH WITH A VARIETY OF MEANINGS OR WAYS. IT IS SOMETHING PEOPLE NEED.  MAN AND WIFE OR A FAMILY BOND OR MY FRIEND WHO IS ALWAYS THERE. MAY YOU BE BLESSED WITH A HEART THAT TRULY KNOWS THE MEANING. THIS POEM IS ABOUT SOUL MATES .

    I LOVE YOU

     I LOVE YOU HOW OFTEN I SAY THOSE WORDS
    I WANT YOU TO KNOW
    I MEANT EVERY WORD
    YOU TAKE THE TIME
    TO LET ME KNOW
    JUST HOW MUCH YOU CARE
    YOUR HAND OUT STRECTHED WITH MINE
    GIVES WARMTH TO MY SOUL
    I CAN NOT EVEN AMAGINE
     LEAVING YOU BEHIND
    SHOULD I LEAVE THIS WORLD OR YOU MINE
    I ONLY KNOW MY HEART MY SOUL
    TOUCHES YOURS INSIDE
    YOU ARE MY SOUL MATE DEVINE
    WITH EVERY BREATH I TAKE
    THE  ESSENCE OF YOUR SOUL TOUCHES MINE
    THERE IS A JOY IN MY HEART WHEN YOU WALK BY
    SENDS MY HEART IN A TWERLE
    WITH MY FACE ALL FLUSHED
    MY HEART IN A WERLE
    WITH A BIG SMILE ON MY FACE
    I WANT YOU TO KNOW
    I LOVE YOU
    WITH YOU FOREVER I'LL STAY THEN
    I'LL LEAVE THIS WORLD
    LOVING YOU

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    dahlusion commented on I LOVE YOU

    02-04-2010

    This should be packaged and giving as a present to everybody in this world. Powerful!!
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    Bettysrainbow48

    02/05/2010

    Thank you I am glad you liked it

    koolmom0 commented on I LOVE YOU

    11-30-2009

    What a beautiful love poem. Make sure you share this with the one you love. Thank you for sharing. Koolmom
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    Bettysrainbow48

    11/30/2009

    THANK YOU I DID .HE LOVES IT.DO YOU THINK IT WOULD MAKE A CARD?

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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