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Words love could call.... Love... Will you let me love you

words

   

Words.... None....
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Blank lines.......
Leaves thoughts.........
How hard .........
Retard....

                          Me......

Am I Retarded........
No.....
But I love you! 
What can I do..........
                     ................. Go......
..................

 You........
How are you........
Are you tired of me yet........
                               Can I make a bet?

            Yes You & Me bet....
                   Are you tired ........
            I want to make you wet......


                               Words....
         I get lost....... Can I stare instead........
                           Before you hurt me .....
         Can I be dead.........


 I'm tender.... Soft... Not insecure...
            What are we waiting for.....
                                     We might be ready...


 Maybe not......
Your hot!


                                      Feel my passion.... 
                             From far away.......
               Don't be done....
  Words too say!

                                        Text me something.....
                                                         Make it good.........
                      I don't think you want another fling.........
                                      This might be the love.....
         
                             Can we should..........


                                     Words come home to me!
               
                                              Red........
      

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Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

toredbloodink’s Poems (71)

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