Do You Want To Know.....

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    The struggle of wanting someone that don't want you.....

    Do You Want To Know.....

          
    Do you want to know.....
    You can have a normal friendship....
    With me......
    I'm taking back all my feelings....
    With all my intensity.....

                           I'm to soft......
                    Normal......
                I started to tell you how I really felt....... Now stop..... OK.... Normal....
     I will help you when I can.....
    I'll give you normal......
    I will never give you my deep emotions......
      I will give you the strong man that I can be.......
    I can give you normal....
    But I'll never give you me....
                                                     Again....
     I didn't ever think I had a chance....
    Then you gave me hope....
    I said something wrong...
    I aapologized now I am a song...
     Ohi get it I was never the station....
    Normal......
    Normal........
    Thank you normal.....
    I am a friend... I thought ....
    See my problem I thought....
    But it wasn't like I was thinking and not saying.... We where having face to face conversation........
    I feel so mislead......
     Enchanted Forrest rings in my head.....
    I thought you said you replayed....
    Our conversations back through your head......
    Thinking of giving us a try....
    Normal....
    I even asked am I coming on to strong...
    I didn't and don't need this....
    You are all tied up.... Skipping on my brain.... Normal....
    I have a fucking brain....
    I think of many conversations where chances of love...
    They seemed possible...
    Once again normal
    Friendship....
    I would have left it there.....
    Now I feel lead on is this fair....
    You can have my normal friendship....
    Will I or would I ever want more of you again.... All always want you and call you the love of my life......
    But we will be normal friends......
    I love you Katherine A Hodgman........



    If you come back to me.....
    I'll be here....
    Your normal friend...... 

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