Winter's Eve

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    This is my first real attempt at blank verse poetry.

    Winter's Eve

    Breathe in, Breathe Out.

    Chilly, crisp air stings my chest.

    One step, two step.

    Crystals crackle under foot.

     

    Pale glow above.

    A friend in this barren place.

    My way is lit.

    I mount the luminance ridge.

     

    Night envelops me.

    Earth and heaven now contrast.

    Black and white worlds.

    I press forward in between.

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    pirites commented on Winter's Eve

    10-24-2009

    I've read your work and enjoy it thoroughly!! Thank you

    limauniform commented on Winter's Eve

    09-24-2009

    Nice sensory details! Love blank verse poems and I have to say, this one's really good, especially for your first attempt! Look forward to reading more of your writing! ^^

    Redrose77 commented on Winter's Eve

    09-20-2009

    Wow! Well done! I can not wait to see more of your writings. Keep up the good work!

    Tray4 commented on Winter's Eve

    09-19-2009

    I like this one,my fav line is the black and white worlds and the last line fits well. good job!

    cassie58 commented on Winter's Eve

    09-19-2009

    A really good first attempt at blank verse. I enjoyed reading it

    quickwrite

    09/19/2009

    Thank you

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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