Simplicity
A home of,
A wood door,
A red roof,
A tiled floor,
And my darling love.
Should it be I need nothing more?
Simplicity
13 Comments
Tags: Philosophy , Love
Poem Commentary
As simple as life has the potential to be, we as people complicate things far too much.
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Poem Comments
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LaPoeme commented on Simplicity
10-23-2009
- Bravo! you capture your essence with such few words. Great talent!
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Redrose77 commented on Simplicity
10-03-2009
- Dude this has to be the most simple of poems yet so full of emotion. Well Done
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zorbica commented on Simplicity
10-01-2009
- **********Sparse, succinct, and beautifully simple**********
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FlowerGirl commented on Simplicity
09-20-2009
- Quickwrite, This Is Well Said...Indeed...A Man And His Family Can Truly Have These Things In Life, And Be Truly Happy. As A Man With More Can Be Very Miserable. We Have The Ability To Build Within Ourselves, Whatever We Choose For Our Lives. Before, It Becomes A Reality! Everyone Has Something Different To Build Upon, That They Feel Will Satisfy Them. Or That They Feel Will Be The Ultimate Of There Happiness! If Our Goals Are Set For Simplicity, And That, Or More, Becomes Our Reality, Than Quite Sure We Will Be Happy. On The Same Note, If Someone Sets A Goal For More And Ends Up With Simplicity..They May Not Be Happy! I Believe, In Simplicity...Because, It Helps To keep Us Real..It Helps To Keep Us Humble. There Are More Things That Need Our Attention In Life To Keep us Balalnced. Not Just Our Physical And Tangible Needs..Like Our Intellect, For Knowledge. And Our Heart.To Keep Us Human.. And Of Course..Our Spirit Need Nourishment As Well.. I Hope We All Are Able To Keep Simplicity In Our Hearts. No Matter What Our Accomplishments..lol Many Blessings To you Quickwrite....And May You Always Be Encouraged To Be Inspired! If Someone
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09/20/2009
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ThoughtsInWords commented on Simplicity
09-20-2009
- Simplicity is the perfect title. A simple expression that says so much. Keep writing! Being only 16, you have so many words yet to flow through you allowing you to discover more of yourself with every phrase.
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