Misty Marsh

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    Poem Commentary

    This poem aims to talk about the clarity of mind one can enjoy by simply losing themselves in nature's mist.

    Misty Marsh

    Smokey mists swirling veil unthinkable verity,
    A feeling of uncertainty plays host.
    Eerie, still, overtakes obscuring clarity,
    A perfect allay, a tranquilizing dose.

    Oak oar glides, gracefully, though silent pools.
    Static waters regain conscious life once more.
    Willowy waves, and stout stones open their dual.
    Crystal beads strike, water rippled evermore.

    Reeds silently, sway. Specters in the fog.
    I slip by, my bow grazes soft shores now.
    I leave canoe, pierce muck to start my slog.
    Straining to stay atop, mud refuses to allow.

    Struggling through, muddy medley I hear.
    An invisible cast, in perfect euphony.
    Phantom voices ring so faint in my ear.
    No symphony could rival in quality.

    In this misty, marsh I lose my very self.
    My hidden, home relieves my worst stress,
    Life’s trivial problems, placed upon a shelf
    Here and now, I have nothing to address.

    In my lost world I aspire to become,
    Nothing more than perfectly numb.

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    LaPoeme commented on Misty Marsh

    10-23-2009

    This poem is very well written- it is elegant, and paints a vivid picture! Great job!

    miry commented on Misty Marsh

    09-24-2009

    Going thru a very stressful time right now, I can appreciate wanting to be somewhere away from my problems...alone with myself....thank you for this inspiring poem.

    quickwrite

    09/24/2009

    Hope things work out for you friend.

    GentleT commented on Misty Marsh

    09-23-2009

    It is nice to have a place of peace where you can relax. You have found it in your marsh. As for me it would be a nightmare. But each of us is unique. I can see your admiration for it from your words.

    MrGee commented on Misty Marsh

    09-23-2009

    EXCELLENT! nice to see you growing as you write. The poem has good rhtymn and rhymn. The last verse is well written and paints a good picture in the readers mind. oh, and the word is eupnea as opposed to euphony. however, And, yes finding oneself is very import. this is a 10. keep up the good work

    quickwrite

    09/23/2009

    Thank you

    Hampton commented on Misty Marsh

    09-22-2009

    I think this is one of your better poems. it reflects a maturity in writing that gives rise to your progress in poetic composition. Very nice.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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