Wind Mills
Windmills stretch my imagination
casting shadows lit by sunlight
catching myths in downy dreams
upon wild windstorm clouds
dancing blades touching
rainbows fanning
quixotic
pipe dreams
fly.
Wind Mills
11 Comments
Tags: Fantasy , Inspirational
- wheelsal
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knight4696 commented on Wind Mills
04-26-2010
- Nice Work Sally! You certainly have a gift with being able to convey so much in so few words, I love the cadence and lay-out of the poem as well. Awesome job! :) Ken
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nhorlandi commented on Wind Mills
04-18-2010
- This one you did it Sally. Carefully chosen words, strong ones, perfect ones and for the most part of it, each word flows smoothly, it fits where it should be.
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04/18/2010
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icu2 commented on Wind Mills
03-19-2010
- This is a lovely poem. I especially like 'when fairies land, pipe dreams fly' Beautiful.
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03/20/2010
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nhorlandi commented on Wind Mills
03-01-2010
- A lovely piece, I remember the wind mills of Holland and we even have wind mills in the Philippines to generate electricity. Cheers
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ginga commented on Wind Mills
02-22-2010
- wheelsal, I am happy to be back here on your page reading extraordinary poetry like I have just read in this poem of amazing imagery and fanciful language. ginga
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03/03/2010
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