Music within my Soul

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    Music within my Soul

     Music:  dances within my soul
    sweet harmonies never alone
    spurs songs into a golden lute
    Blank canvas of the magic mute

    silence speaks another note
    finding flutes and horns to float
    to fugues or canons and sway
    waving wands conducters play

    ballads live within my soul
    vesper choirs carole and toll
    music reveals a Master plan
    sweet'ning the requiem of man.

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    aysha commented on Music within my Soul

    01-03-2011

    I really enjoyed your poem, Powerful piece.. rated a 10
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    DeepEclipse commented on Music within my Soul

    05-27-2010

    Soft read. It is like it is part of another realm. Reaching a deeper part of the self. And sometimes causing feelings that words could never activate. Life is so interesting. Enjoyed this short piece.
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    wheelsal

    05/27/2010

    Thank you so much. You made my day. Sally

    nhorlandi commented on Music within my Soul

    04-18-2010

    Wish I could hear a melody so that not only my soul could dance to the tune but also my heart.Good rhyme, rough but lovely.
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    wheelsal

    04/18/2010

    Another thank you and wish you well.

    ginga commented on Music within my Soul

    03-26-2010

    sal, Such music to my ears this poem is...in all its musical descriptions I love the requiem of man line. ginga
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    wheelsal

    05/27/2010

    This was awhile back and I just found your comment. I thank you from the bottom of my heart late is better than not at all. Sally

    devaamido commented on Music within my Soul

    03-21-2010

    Beautiful word pictures describing the "music of the soul" available to anybody iling to get quiet enough to listen. nice piece of work.
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    wheelsal

    04/30/2010

    Thank you to one of my favoite poets. Sally

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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