why nightingale's sing

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    the exert's are from The Religion, by Tim Wilcox, when Tannhäuser meets the mysterious Amparo

    why nightingale's sing


    " In Araby, they say that once upon time, all roses where white. "

    "One evening, beneath a waning moon, a nightingale alighted by such a rose "

    " and when he saw her he fell in love "

    " until that time, no nightingale had been heard to sing "

    " a song of wondrous beauty burst from his throat "

    " and he throw his wings around her in a passionate embrace "

    " clasping the rose to his breast "

    " with such wild passion that the thorns pierced his heart "

    " the nightingale's blood stained the rose's white petals red "


    too this very day
    red rose's
    instill our lives
    with passion and love
    and beautiful melody's
     

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    Stryx commented on why nightingale's sing

    05-02-2010

    Aside from the spelling, this is a delightful tale.
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    786mona commented on why nightingale's sing

    04-29-2010

    nice! good job! u have a true talent , plz keep on writing:)
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    alb29oclfl

    04/29/2010

    ty

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