puddles

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    while sipping on a hot cup of tea, and waiting on a coming storm, I was flooded with memories of past storms and watching my children playing in puddles

    puddles

     After a boom and a holler, and puddles in it's a wake.

    Ole Mrs' Wren settled in for a bath, the young

    Mr' Jay did chase her away, it my turn I did hear him say.

     Lil Ben still up, oh what a splash amidst giggles galore, 

    Cry's of delight, muddy toes tend to giggle, while

    dancing to rhythm, Oh don't you know.

    Ole Mr.Sycamore took to shaking with glee bringing

    fresh showers,  why thank you with please.

    The Dove's cooing love song, and eyes full of wonder,  

    Mr. Worm started to dance, doing his moon walk,

    Oh don't you know.

    Amidst cry's delight the Dove's scurried away, oh such face

    a little heart breaking, with tear soaked eye's,

    I just want to play, with mud giggling toes and

    and palms pointing outward.

    " my puddles gone away"

     

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    Bettysrainbow48 commented on puddles

    03-14-2010

    I like the way you displayed this warm creative poem. You did a wonderful job on this one too.
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    jademelissa74 commented on puddles

    03-12-2010

    What an extraordinary piece! The imagery that you used to create this poem is so delightful and warm. The innocence of the soul is well portrayed here. I loved it!
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    alb29oclfl

    03/12/2010

    ty

    Teardrops commented on puddles

    03-10-2010

    How i remember the puddles and i refuse to stop every time it rains My lab and i see who can get the muddiest loved the poem my friend Marie
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    alb29oclfl

    03/10/2010

    ty, bringing smiles, and happy tears are best joy one can have.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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