What do you see?

4 Comments

Tags:
  • Other

    What do you see?

     What do you see when you look at me?
    My lips, my breast, or just longing for whats in between.
    My ears, my arms or my neither region.
    What are you looking for intellectual companion or abooty call for the season?
    There is so much more that isnt exposed by the naked eye.
    Do you have the time or fuck it and just say bye?

    Poem Comments

    (4)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    phatdaddee commented on What do you see?

    07-10-2009

    Why do women want men to ignore and adore their bodies at the same time? It is in this duality that we differ so much. Women are just more complex. Not a complaint just a fact. Men are beast built of pride and our egos are so easy to massage.
    Reply to Comment

    boriquamorena

    07/25/2009

    Its not we dont want you to adore our bodies. Its we dont want that to be your primary focus and reason for engaging with us. Basically not a superficial man.

    MsKrystle commented on What do you see?

    07-01-2009

    I like this one....You've expressed so much in such a short poem....Love me for me and not just my body....Nice poem
    Reply to Comment

    boriquamorena

    07/01/2009

    Same here are looks that important?

    Product commented on What do you see?

    06-28-2009

    Your poems are so direct, I like that. They hit deep.Keep writting.
    Reply to Comment

    boriquamorena

    06/30/2009

    I feel like this but thanx for the encouragement.

    FLAWLES commented on What do you see?

    06-24-2009

    If you post a picture. I'd tell you what I see. I see you live in Dondo Beach. Hell, that's near me.
    Reply to Comment

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    boriquamorena’s Poems (8)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    YOUR LOVE 1 07/26/2009
    To Be 2 07/01/2009
    UNTITLED 3 06/30/2009
    Overated 7 06/27/2009
    ? YOU ? 2 06/26/2009
    IF I ? 3 06/26/2009
    What do you see? 4 06/24/2009
    untitled 4 06/16/2009
    Top of Page