IF I ?

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    IF I ?

     If I think in a fleshly mind, If done wrong I breathe retaliation.
    If in a Godly mind it exudes inspiration.
    If I follow in the footsteps of the Good book's dictation.
    What will be my biggest salvation?
    Or do I deny the word and be lead into temptation?
    But will I receive His gratification?

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    castlemist commented on IF I ?

    06-30-2009

    I've read all your poems and love the raw, openess. I think you should try mixing up deep thoughts like this one and the eroticism of the others and see what happens. Jerry
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    boriquamorena

    06/30/2009

    You know Inever thought of that I'll give that a try.Thanx

    prophesy commented on IF I ?

    06-28-2009

    i feel the deepness of your thoughts. /continued blessings
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    boriquamorena

    06/30/2009

    thanx for the comment any advice?

    FLAWLES commented on IF I ?

    06-27-2009

    Bueno mami. Como esta? Este es muy bueno; pero, yo tienes uno para tu. I hope you understood that. My Spanish is VERY limited. Get back to me and let me know what I tried to say after you go to my page and read "If You What?"
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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