Overated

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    Overated

     As I lay here all alone sexually frustrated.
    I'm trying to convince myself dick is overated.
    I massage my breast to calm myself and put my body at ease.
    But my eyes close and allow my fingers to become a sexual tease.
    Ohhh like little workers possessed they have a mind of their own.
    They run back and forth, jump in and out the pool of wetness until I let out a deep moan.
    Oh my goodness they pleasurably torment me until I release an uncontrollable gush.
    My eyes open and I think the real would have been better, but this self maintenance also made me feel just as flush and I blush.
    My body weak feeling semisedated and still sexually frustrated.
    I still think to myself, Is dick overated?

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    Mimoshki commented on Overated

    11-08-2009

    lmao... i can def. realate to this poem. my sentiments exactly... rate my poem
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    phatdaddee commented on Overated

    07-10-2009

    Don't give up on ALL dick it may just be the ones you've encountered or the wielder of the weapon of mass dick-struction! Someone is not on their job. What you need is a stunt man!
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    boriquamorena

    07/25/2009

    First of all never gave up on dick, dont get that twisted papacito.I was commenting on the O.G. Mad Humpers out there. The ones that let us down skill wise and fustrated enough to question dick.

    boriquamorena

    07/25/2009

    First of all never gave up on dick, dont get that twisted papacito.I was commenting on the O.G. Mad Humpers out there. The ones that let us down skill wise and fustrated enough to question dick.

    MsKrystle commented on Overated

    07-01-2009

    Hmmm good question.....if you can bust one by yourself maybe it is overrated.....but its still good to have a nice stiff one every now and then...Nice poem
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    boriquamorena

    07/01/2009

    You know it takes a female to get that. Thanx for th e comment mommi

    cooter commented on Overated

    06-29-2009

    Why, that's dirty! Cool. I would just edit it a little, to make the meter match a little better if you are going to use rhyme. I found a neat trick to rhyme is rhyme 2 or more words in a line to the next line. 'flush' and 'blush' for example, and 'rush' 'gush' - my mind is mush.
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    boriquamorena

    06/30/2009

    thanxs for that bit of info.I thought it was over done.So I played with it.I appreciate the advice.

    dahlusion commented on Overated

    06-29-2009

    "Dick" may be over-rated (who ever he is) but tongue is not: licking, sucking, and swallowing can never be replaced with self-maintenance though, I enjoy a long, slow masturbation a few times a week. This poem is very hot!
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    boriquamorena

    06/30/2009

    I was kinda embarrassed to post a piece like this. the encouragement I appreciate.thanx

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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    boriquamorena’s Poems (8)

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    YOUR LOVE 1 07/26/2009
    To Be 2 07/01/2009
    UNTITLED 3 06/30/2009
    Overated 7 06/27/2009
    ? YOU ? 2 06/26/2009
    IF I ? 3 06/26/2009
    What do you see? 4 06/24/2009
    untitled 4 06/16/2009
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