Beaches in Black

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    Beaches in Black
    My words are your weapons. Every thought turned to speech. Every man becomes a spectator and all my whispers are screams. Waist deep in fresh water with no where to run. Eyes filled with salt water, skin charred in the sun .

    Words pour from mouths like tea from a kettle. Black ink on paper we've lost sight of the quill. With the lack of a feather, dye flows on down stream. A variety of colors emerge some like shades in a dream.

    Now we wait for the those verbs and nouns to take shape. We comfort one another with apologies and admittance of mistakes.

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    kdarcy commented on Beaches in Black

    11-28-2010

    Enjoyed the read, you have some great word phrases here. You do yourself an injustice by not giving this piece a title ... it is deserving of a title, 10 from me, be well k
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    RiderPunch

    11/28/2010

    Thanks Unfortunately I am yet to find a title that I am satisfied with. Eventually I may name.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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