Falling

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    Falling




    futility less necessity is (
                                           .....)
    city full of futility where
    iNSTiTUTiONS  f
                                 a
                                   l
                                    l
                                      with their
    full force on IndIvIduals! who were
    to be served not - to be ruled

    IndIvIdual less souls fail to fight for
    (their right to responsibility.......)

    fail to fulfill their promise, fail to
    condemn themselves while the blame f
                                                         a
                                                           l
                                                            l
                                                             s
    on......
    their iNSTiTUTiONS for absorbing guilt
    and IndIvIdualIty
    .....(
             ) is futility less necessary?

     

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    earthly commented on Falling

    02-16-2010

    interesting-yes we do so often lose the feeling of (I)-getting lost in the pressure of society/life...Earthly
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    redbloodink commented on Falling

    12-21-2009

    Milk wow..... this is an awesome format.... I think this would piss many people off that think they are some-one to be served thinking they were greater then another.... Job well done.... as we all fall He will stand and take us back into His loving arms.... now that is awesome to me... thanx Milk... never think that you should quit this amazing talent you have... red
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    orangepony commented on Falling

    08-09-2009

    on this i do agree,express yourself in this matter,just add a spice of nice,thank,orangepony
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    photochick commented on Falling

    07-23-2009

    very different and catches the readers attention that's for sure great poem and structure I enjoyed it thanks for sharing
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    sammia commented on Falling

    07-22-2009

    i like it. the words falling is really kool..great job
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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