who, what, when. where & WHY?

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    who, what, when. where & WHY?


    what ...   in a land of if,
                   but, maybe and perhaps
    where...  a search for
                   answers is always
                   successful; particularly
                   if you forget to look
    when ...  all the concrete values
                   to be found are walls
                   and the brutality of
                   virtue is just a cross to bare
    who ...    is to be blamed
                   you that have not asked
    why  ....

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    Artie commented on who, what, when. where & WHY?

    01-23-2010

    I like how you think- when ... all the concrete values to be found are walls and the brutality of virtue is a cross to bare - these lines are perfectly worded. This really got me thinking - 10 from me
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    redbloodink commented on who, what, when. where & WHY?

    12-21-2009

    so powerful... Milk... so powerfully true.... I got the message,,,, Thanx Red
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    kijealy commented on who, what, when. where & WHY?

    08-16-2009

    this is so true..the answers to the riddle. it makes perfect sense.. it's really deep and holds a hidden secret of constant thought...really great write!
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    orangepony commented on who, what, when. where & WHY?

    08-09-2009

    neverending thought, that keep me interested, orangepony
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    Tempy commented on who, what, when. where & WHY?

    07-31-2009

    i hoped you would tell me why cos I dont want to pry but listen and hear you is all i could do very nice piece of writing you have here have a good night
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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