UNRULY NEIGHBORS ARE OBNOXIOUS

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    UPA UNRULY NEIGHBOR CHALLENGE
    UNRULY NEIGHBORS ARE OBNOXIOUS

    UNRULY NEIGHBORS ARE OBNOXIOUS

     Unruly neighbors are rude to say the least
    Never say good morning .. never a kind gesture
    Running to and fro
    Unique clique .. i refuse to join
    Lewd behaviour
    Yelling insanely .. they can't function without

    Noise follows them like a dark cloud .. no doubt
    Everyone has problems
    Inside their own troubled minds
    Going .. going .. going .. almost gone
    Hardly a peaceful moment do they grasp
    Butting heads .. it's their notorious trademark
    Open for friendship .. i don't believe
    Rude .. is their middle name
    Say hello .. they'll snarl .. bitch and bite

    Copyright © August 2009
    StandingBear

    UPA UNRULY NEIGHBOR CHALLENGE

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    EyesOfRain commented on UNRULY NEIGHBORS ARE OBNOXIOUS

    09-08-2012

    I have had more than a few unruly neighbors. You've captured the essence of the feeling well with this. Nice work!
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    StandingBear

    09/15/2012

    You and I both as well as many others i'm sure. They're out there and rarely do they go away. Thanks!

    Mareann commented on UNRULY NEIGHBORS ARE OBNOXIOUS

    01-02-2010

    Fabulous writing-- I hear you on every word of this brilliant poem, well said-- Mary
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    StandingBear

    01/02/2010

    Thank you Mareann for your great comments. I'm humbled. SBear

    lunamarie commented on UNRULY NEIGHBORS ARE OBNOXIOUS

    09-13-2009

    hmmm ... reminds me of my last apartment ... this chick downstairs and her drug-addict boyfriend ... whooa ... did she get my temper fired up one morning ... I ran after her ... outside ... in the snow! ... with no clothes on !!! ... ha ha ha!!! ... Luna
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    StandingBear

    09/13/2009

    Hhmmm, possibly a conspiracy plan executed to perfection to get you right where they wanted you .. nude, outside in the snow! Thank you LM! SBear

    cmlestrade commented on UNRULY NEIGHBORS ARE OBNOXIOUS

    09-13-2009

    You could never live in this complex. Every Friday and Saturday night from about 9 to 3 in the morning they take over the rear parking lot like naughty teens, yowling, howling and waiting for the 84 year old apartment manager to give them what for, and she does, It's been quiet since the 4th because many of the tenants got fed up and called the police. Oh yes, I know about rude neighbors. After reading your poem I think there must be rude neighbor college.
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    StandingBear

    09/13/2009

    I'd prob be with them yowling and howling so i could get inside their circle, then lead them to a secluded place to party so i could return home to sleep. Yes, rude neighbor college should be mandatory. Thank you cmlestrade! SBear

    ginga commented on UNRULY NEIGHBORS ARE OBNOXIOUS

    09-01-2009

    SB, The clincher in the last line and I believe they wuill do these things. You can't pick your neighbors for sure cause they come and go. I have a bunch of squirrely bicycle riding kids who keep using my driveway as a turnaround and lately I found rocks on my front lawn. They're annoying me for sure and they've already been spoken to. I guess I'll have to turn up the heat! As you can see I can relate to this poem! ginga
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    StandingBear

    09/01/2009

    Thank you ginga! I can see you chaining all the bicycles up and only releasing them after apologies are offered and the rocks are p/u. *Joking* SBear

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