Undecided love

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Undecided love

Roses are red,which are pure as light
love is grand, without a pure sight
I may love you or maybe him more
But how do we solve this without blood and gore

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tifalockheartx3 commented on Undecided love

09-30-2010

i like this poem;* i really like the whole "How do we solve this without blood and gore." :)

girlygirl1234 commented on Undecided love

03-23-2010

wowwwwwwwww very good candy i relaly liked it. u put alot of thought into it

papapaczki commented on Undecided love

03-23-2010

The rhyme is good in this poem. I like the spin on "Roses are Red".

Artie commented on Undecided love

03-23-2010

There aren't many words here, but you sure do tell a story. Good job

koolmom0 commented on Undecided love

03-23-2010

Love can be very confusing at times, very painful. But there is always beauty in it, if you're willing to find it. :) Kool

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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