a poem from my bestie

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    a poem from my bestie

     i shot an arrow towards the sky
    it hit an angel floating by
    it shot her wing and now shes dieing
    she cant understand why shes crying
    she wants to know how to solve this pain
    she says "im an angel so im not sopose to feel anything"
    and yet she dont know that it all a dream
    and im the one that ruined everything...

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    chasitylake123 commented on a poem from my bestie

    05-27-2010

    who ruined what what are you talking about what happened tell me now
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    girlygirl1234 commented on a poem from my bestie

    04-21-2010

    wow. this is really good. iliek it alot good job bestie. keep writing you truly are brilliant.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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