Too Much

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    Too Much

     If i asked you to give me the world 
    Before i could be your girl 
    Give me all your riches before
    I offer you some kisses 
    would that be asking for too much?
    If asked for you to take me shopping 
    Then afterwords club hopping
    Or if i asked you to fall madly in love with me
    And carry me off into the sunset
    Then would that be asking for to much?
    Well all of those things were just to much
    But ,i didn't ask you for any of it 
    I just asked that you were here
    That u were willing to try
    I didn't ask you to die 4 me
    Or to cut me open and watch me bleed 
    I just simply wanted you to be happy
    But that my friend 
    Well , obviously, that was asking for too much!

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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Too Much

    12-05-2010

    A powerful lesson here about self worth and asking for what you deserve and accepting nothing less. Many need to be warned. You are worth waiting for and working for. A wonderful write.........E
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    GucciGurl commented on Too Much

    02-17-2010

    This is so great. It is amazing how they cant do the simple things.
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    cmlestrade commented on Too Much

    02-11-2010

    Wow excellent write. Have you noticed when you don't ask for a thing you usually don't get a thing not even the respect you deserve. Let this be a lesson to all who have given and expected nothing in return.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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