A BUTTERFLIES SECRET

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A BUTTERFLIES SECRET

REACH INTO YOUR CAGE OF BUTTERFLIES
LET ONE FLY AWAY
I LONG TO BE THE ONE YOU RELEASE TODAY
I AM THE ONLY ONE FOR YOU TO BELIEVE
I AM THE MOST LOYAL
N I JUST WANNA BE SUCCESFUL
BUT IN ORDER FOR ME TO DO ALL OF THIS
SO RELEASE ME
THIS IS MY FINAL PLEA
IN ORDER FOR ME TO BE HAPPY I MUST BE FREE
IF NOT I WILL BE A REGRET IN THE BACK OF YOUR MIND
WONDERING,IF U RELEAS ME THE LIFE I WOULD OF FOUND
BUT IF U LET ME GO
SURELY..... U WOULD KNOW

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BeeBeeButterfly commented on A BUTTERFLIES SECRET

08-28-2009

im feeling this right here. i call myself butterfly because im always looking for that freedom and this one right here spoke to me on that level.

mcelvain

11/11/2009

thank you i appreciate it.

LIFECHANGES commented on A BUTTERFLIES SECRET

08-22-2009

I can feel the butterflies yearning 4 freedom. At times we all have had the need 2-b free. I really like this piece.

mcelvain

11/11/2009

thank you . i appreciate this so much

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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