The Perfect Stranger

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    • blackrose95
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    I don't know where this came from.

    The Perfect Stranger

    My heart’s breaking

    With every step your taking

    Away from me.

    I wanna scream, I wanna yell

    But how do I tell,

    a perfect stranger that I care?!

    I’m at a loss for words,

    I can’t explain how much this hurts.

    I see you making friends,

    I know a heart always mends.

    And despite my soul being in debris,

    I ‘m happy you’re forgetting me.

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    MarionYost commented on The Perfect Stranger

    02-11-2010

    Yeah, I'm going through this RIGHT NOW, a guy I've NEVER met in reality... pathetic, I know.. But whatever, I wish him well. This is a great poem I love the flow, Great wording. My favorite line(s) are : "I know a heart always mends.And despite my soul being in debris,I‘m happy you’re forgetting me." Great write thanks for sharing this. All the best -Marion-
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    Tempy commented on The Perfect Stranger

    02-11-2010

    oh this is sadenning. Yet still a fantastically structured write
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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