Being Free

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    • blackrose95
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    This is from my mom's point of view. I wanted to tell the story but also add a little ha factor. Hope I did a good job!

    Being Free

    I saved you from dying

    And what do I get in return: you lying.

    I protected you from your demon,

    I gave you your right to be a freeman.

    Yet you stab me in the back,

    Make me pack,

    And tell me that we belong in a little shack.

    You might have been laughing then at me.

    But now the tables are turned, the roles are reversed, I now posses the key.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                -Blackrose95

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    MarionYost commented on Being Free

    02-13-2010

    10! This is awesome, Sad that this is the situation, but.. Great write. See? Pain ALWAYS makes for a good poem. All the best -Marion-
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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