The Past

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    hehe another love poem, i hope you like it:)

    The Past

    Feelings can change but memories remain

    The time can pass, but my tears still last

    I know I can’t forget you

    We knew we couldn’t make it through

    But all I feel now isn’t the sorrow in my heart,

    , is something more important,            

    , is your kiss in the past

    Every time you were looking at me

    I could feel your warmth and your protection

    All around me

    Every time you were crying

    I wanted to take your pain away

    And replace it with the love I kept for you

    While you were lying

    I know nothing is still the same

    I don’t love you anymore

    But I’ll always remember this feeling

    Deep inside my soul

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    jtlove commented on The Past

    06-05-2010

    The thing about poetry is it can sound so deep when it really isn't. I don't love you anymore but I'll always remember this feeling deep inside. HA! It wasn't deep inside to begin with.
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    Dead4Rest

    06/05/2010

    loser, why dont you try writting a poem before you make yourself look anymore stupid. this is a good poem, and just because you dont like it, doesnt give you the right, to leave a rude comment!!

    myimmortality

    06/05/2010

    well maybe you're right but poetry is a way to express what you're feeling.i never said i'm perfect to it or i'm even good.. i know what you mean but sorry i'm not a pro or something.. i just write what i feel and please write a poem and then judge mine:) have a good day my friend

    bluskyinthenite commented on The Past

    06-05-2010

    "Every time you were looking at me I could feel your warmth and your protection" He does the same. watching watching all the time .. Yet I love him forever more.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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