That's For Sure

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    • nanoboy909
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    That's For Sure

    That's For Sure

     

    By. Dran Acosta

     

    Baby I cant take it no more.

     

    Every time I try you shut the door.

     

    Why do you have to be so hardcore?

     

    My heart is sore, not like before,

     

    Sitting here at the beach shore

     

    Wanting you more and more.

     

    You're the one that I adore.

     

    Thinking of you to the core.

     

    Waiting for the rain to pour.

     

    I gave you my heart the one you tore.

     

    You broke my heart to the gore.

     

    I'm going crazy like a wild boar,

     

    counting from one to four,

     

    1,2,3,4, why did you break my heart once more?

     

    Look baby I'm on the floor,

     

    waiting for you to open the door,

     

    so I can tell you this once more,

     

     I told you just like before

     

    I love you so much more,

     

    and baby that's for sure.

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    dahlusion commented on That's For Sure

    01-14-2013

    The love, the pain. The pain, the love—you nailed it! Bravo!
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    aysha commented on That's For Sure

    01-04-2011

    Very nice, Love is pain but somehow if its true your pain will be gone soon
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    themommyof2 commented on That's For Sure

    11-02-2010

    Love is so hard, but it can be so good. I'm not sure a happy medium is a great place to be. For what is love if it is not backed up with passion. Nice peice.
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    ShanneN commented on That's For Sure

    10-17-2010

    i agree with them VVVV. tons of emotion. great job. =)
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    kpeery09 commented on That's For Sure

    10-16-2010

    Nice Nice, I like it alot man, keep up the good work and I agree with Sydney it has a lot of emotion in it and thats what makes it good.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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