Lonely

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    Loneliness a point in my life that I'm still going through...

    Lonely
    Lonely

    By. Dran Acosta

    Walking through the rain,

    with so much pain.

    I can't explain, why I'm going insane.

    I don't even know what I'm trying to gain.

    'cause of all I've done just went down the drain.

    Everything I've done was so plain,

    but now I'm going insane and I don't wanna complain.

    With a love so sweet like candy cane,

    I've been push to the back of a rail road train.

    I don't wanna feel this way down the lane.

    Out of insanity I'll shoot my brain,

    I don't wanna feel the blood pump through my vain,

    just let it flow and let it stain.

    I'm so lonely in this cold world that's all I could explain.

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    ansari commented on Lonely

    06-19-2010

    wow, the whole story rhymes so well, makes it interesting read. thank you nano. a 10 from me.
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    KING commented on Lonely

    05-26-2010

    I can tell you wrote in the moment as you were feeling it. That how our work is sometimes when we write. Here for the moment and then the feeling is gone. On any rate i can relate man.
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    Sydney commented on Lonely

    05-25-2010

    wow, this is really amazing. you made a really great job explaining or a flow of images.
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    1990lh commented on Lonely

    05-23-2010

    yeah i think that is the defintion being lonely. i think everyone have fletthis way b4, but u gotta try not to stay at this point u gotta push through
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    786mona commented on Lonely

    05-23-2010

    i like this poem and i like how u eneded it withe the same rhyme. i like the last line " I'm so lonely in this cold world that's all I could explain." wow it describe my world. nicely writen my friend!
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