Survive

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Survive

Your days have turned dark
omnious clouds obliterate the sun
as the rain drenches the soil
forming rivers of mud
Overwhelming shadows surround you
making it impossible to remember the sun
But the light will triumph
even though you can't see it yet
it looms all around you
above you
inside you
The clouds will part
the shadows chased away
by the brlliant light
You will re emerge
healed
whole
and as always
loved

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thecross commented on Survive

03-28-2010

Nice write, I enjoyed this piece very well written.

miry

03/28/2010

Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to read it and leave a comment

Dano commented on Survive

03-27-2010

your words struck a person chord with me... i love it when i come across a poet who i am not familiar with and i am able to relate to the words they are sharing... nicely done

miry

03/27/2010

Thank you...

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

miry’s Poems (33)

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Catch Me 1
Serving You 0
Free 0
I Remember 0
I Am 0
I am from.... 0
My Life 0
Survive 2
Fragments of me 2
One Short Year 0
Don't Change 0
Larger than life 1
Together 0
Again 0
Memory 0
Tears 0
Wings 0
Just let me be 2
More Time 0
Sad notes playing 1
The Magic 1
My lifeline to you 2
I won't tell you 1
I miss you my friend 2
All is Well 1
Smiling 0
Waiting For You 1
Forever 0
Nine Months 1
Loving You 1
Prayer 0
Missing You 2
My Soul 0