Just let me be

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    Just let me be

    So tired I can only cry

    but only when I’m alone

    too hard to explain all the reasons why

    And he who should understand

    doesn’t…

    …but you

                 do.

    My life has been a tough journey

    lots of tears and laughter

    one burden at a time

    Now multiple boulders oppress me

    making it hard to see the sun

    From where I stand

    only darkness and lightning are visible

    In my heart I know the beautiful sunlight is

    out there

    but right now all I want to do

    is to be left alone

    just let me be

    for a little while

    stop all your demands

    and just love me

    even though I can’t love back

    right now

    And my tears keep flowing

    drowning my thoughts

    looking for peace.

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    MYLIFE commented on Just let me be

    09-24-2009

    Awesome work. I love ad I feel it everyday of my life! Good work

    miry

    09/24/2009

    Thank you so much for the comment! I'm hoping this too shall pass...for you too!

    torimode commented on Just let me be

    09-24-2009

    Very heart - wrenching! I feel your pain in this poem. You certainly did a fine job of getting your point across.

    miry

    09/24/2009

    Thank you my friend!

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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