Just let me be

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    Just let me be

    So tired I can only cry

    but only when I’m alone

    too hard to explain all the reasons why

    And he who should understand

    doesn’t…

    …but you

                 do.

    My life has been a tough journey

    lots of tears and laughter

    one burden at a time

    Now multiple boulders oppress me

    making it hard to see the sun

    From where I stand

    only darkness and lightning are visible

    In my heart I know the beautiful sunlight is

    out there

    but right now all I want to do

    is to be left alone

    just let me be

    for a little while

    stop all your demands

    and just love me

    even though I can’t love back

    right now

    And my tears keep flowing

    drowning my thoughts

    looking for peace.

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    MYLIFE commented on Just let me be

    09-24-2009

    Awesome work. I love ad I feel it everyday of my life! Good work

    miry

    09/24/2009

    Thank you so much for the comment! I'm hoping this too shall pass...for you too!

    torimode commented on Just let me be

    09-24-2009

    Very heart - wrenching! I feel your pain in this poem. You certainly did a fine job of getting your point across.

    miry

    09/24/2009

    Thank you my friend!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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