Suicide

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    Suicide
    Suicide is a crazy thing
    It happens mostly in all teens
    It runs across their crazy minds
    It's a stupid idea as soon they'll find
    They cut across
    There was no loss
    They cut straight down
    And they have found
    That yes it takes away the pain
    But few have lost and few have gained

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    dustyrebel70 commented on Suicide

    06-16-2009

    I like the imagery in your poem, So many kids think the world ends in their teens but if they can hang on they will see there is so much more in this life we have. This was sad but true. and I hope whoever thinks like this will come to realize this isn't the way out. Thank you for bringing it to light
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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