Her Chance

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    • jessicalynn2k3
    • Made a new poem you all should read it and rate it XD its really good <3

    Her Chance
    A baby grows up fast
    So all cute times are long gone past
    Now comes power and respect
    For you, the mother, on the deck
    You sit there wondering why she left
    You were hoping it was just a test
    She found a man who makes her happy
    So stop making her feel crappy
    Its not her fault she found the one
    Who will show and take her somewhere fun
    Since your babys strong and tall
    Its now her chance to get it all

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    Deathblade15 commented on Her Chance

    04-09-2009

    Wow this is so good, you're really good at this, I actually almost cried on this one.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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