Striped of all dignity

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    Striped of all dignity

    Striped of all dignity

    　

    Striped of all dignity and all empty inside

    confused about my circumstances I have lost any hope for pride

    unconscious yet still awake, Feels like life is eating me from within

    I don’t have any favor from family or friends

    No house to shelter me, No job for my needs

    Something is seeping out of me but Im too desolate to bleed

    The wall are closing in on me, I have no room to breath

    Yes I have run out of choices there is nothing up my sleeve

    Bound from head to foot, I can see but don’t believe

    That this is all that I have left out of everything that I achieved

    　

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    ahardwalk commented on Striped of all dignity

    11-30-2010

    I hope now you realize there is hope for you as long as you have breath in your body you have the power to make it through anything prayers go to you.. nicely written poem
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    redbloodink commented on Striped of all dignity

    11-20-2009

    writing isn't all in what we see as we read it lays in the true message some may never see... There is always hope and love .... some times it comes best from ones we don't know or never meet ..... Great work
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    christliked

    11/20/2009

    I love your spirit thank you

    BoSweets commented on Striped of all dignity

    10-29-2009

    very nice write and so many feel this very same way.
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    christliked

    10/29/2009

    ty for your support read you soon

    Redrose77 commented on Striped of all dignity

    10-26-2009

    wow thats really deep. I like what you said about feeling like theres no room to breathe.
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    Oblaidon commented on Striped of all dignity

    10-13-2009

    I think you meant "stripped". Seems a sense of hopelessness. No light at the end of the tunnel?
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    christliked

    10/13/2009

    this is just one of many poems and i enjoy several emotions and that is what was shared then. ty for your comments and I hope that the typing erors did not make it to hard for you to follow, but you did get the message hopelessness

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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