Sometimes On My Mind

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  • Love
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  • Emotional
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  • Loss

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    The sporatic reminiscence of a past love. Memories never fade away. 

    Sometimes On My Mind

    The smile that you give at the sight of mine

    Our nights conversation that spilled into the new day

    Revealing the thoughts captured in your mind

    The love that I have for you that just cant simply go away

    Makes me miss you

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    knight4696 commented on Sometimes On My Mind

    01-22-2010

    Magic! I like this one a lot ... you are able ot convey so much in so few words. Very Nice! :) Ken
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    MagicRock

    01/23/2010

    Thanks again!!! FInally someone who can see quality versus quantity!!! Short poems like this are what I like to call "Java Poems"... they're small in length but pack a punch!!!! LMBO

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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