Smiles
Smilespay botox
to be
wrinkle free
Wrinkles
would I pay
for smiles
to see
Smiles
5 Comments
Tags: Smile
pay botox
to be
wrinkle free
Wrinkles
would I pay
for smiles
to see
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Poem Comments
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10-30-2009
- i think this is a great poem . . . .a wonderful reflection on what is really important in life!!!
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07-28-2009
- So much said in so few words. This is the ultimate of making every words count and what poetry is all about. Sally
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07/28/2009
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07-28-2009
- The nursery rhyme poem. Interesting to see written for adults. It is far more didactic than metaphorical in nature. It has the shape of a smile if it's put on its side. It could become a concrete poem if it were to be put on the page in that manner. Which would give it a tad more metaphorical intent. That would fall under the Charles Olson category of poetry. A poet friend// RH Peat
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07/28/2009
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exclusivelye commented on Smiles
07-23-2009
- I'll take the Botox, thank you very much! Silly poem. Entertaining.
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SpiritSong commented on Smiles
07-12-2009
- i like this...what a great play on thought and words.. short and fun and oh so accurately true a??? LoL!...Thanks Jaycee
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07/13/2009
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