Slow Ride

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    Slow Ride

    Slow Ride....


    All those things I thought to be real...
    Always seem to be out of my grasp.....
    Maybe just not meant to be for me..
    And soon to discover with no great surprise....
    The anger of angels are never to return.....
    With my hope running low,I want to take that slow ride.....
    Nights seem to find me all alone...
    When you slipped from my hand....
    Truth and lies in between,lies can't be undone...
    Romours on the street doesent bring you back....
    The anger of angels are never to return....
    With my hope running low,I'm gonna take that slow ride...

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    fmrdancer commented on Slow Ride

    10-03-2009

    A short one (Like mine) but full of feeling. Beautifully written.
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    Kukia

    10/03/2009

    TY,very kind of you to say.

    photochick commented on Slow Ride

    08-30-2009

    wow very passionate beautiful words flow together perfectly you have alot of talent and i cant wait to read more of your work short yet powerful great write
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    Kukia

    10/03/2009

    Late commin but TY very much

    NJay commented on Slow Ride

    07-30-2009

    Oh so beautifully written. Take a slow ride brb. You will definately have what you desire. Kudos for a job well done.
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    Kukia

    07/31/2009

    TY very much NJay,I still want to twik it so to speak,I'm happy u liked it!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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