An Anime Lulliby

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    An Anime Lulliby

    An Anime Lulliby

    The hill you once walked down....
    Was now covered with many spots of sunlight....
    I'm standing here all alone....
    Remembering all the heart-warming memories....
    You were the one,you are the one,who I love....
    My eyes started to water from the wind.....
    As you became a distant figure....
    I will always remember no matter the changes....
    Just this one thing,this one thing,though it's a plain thing...
    I will gladly show it to you...
    This one thing covered in glory....
    Forever and ever,I will hold it dear......       by Bryan

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    blanket commented on An Anime Lulliby

    12-04-2009

    I love this....its simplicity is the best part. You have captured a good moment in time. Good job. One nit...spell lullaby correctly =) other than that brilliant.
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    MrGee commented on An Anime Lulliby

    12-04-2009

    Very nice. I especially like the use of the metaphor in the line- Was now covered with spots of sunlight - has a nice asian influence. YOu paint a good picture in the mind of the reader.The meter is also easily seen in this work. a 10
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    cliftondurant commented on An Anime Lulliby

    11-28-2009

    yes we can remember beautiful memories and often smile about them
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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