Simplicity

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5 minute lyric poem. i don't like titles much howvever i hope this on is appropriate.

Simplicity

A summer's day steeped in heat,
a tender kiss so lovely and sweet,
a blooming flower that smiles to the sun,
and a companionable friend rolled into one.

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Artie commented on Simplicity

10-22-2009

Nice piece - call it a happy day burrito! 10 from me

Paleidia commented on Simplicity

07-12-2009

This sounds like a perfect day! Beautifully written!

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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