Broken
thunder, lightning, rain, hail.
pouring, beating, slashing, stale.
wet, cold, shivering, mess.
lost, alone, hopeless.
Broken
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Tags: Emotional Sadness Loss
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07-12-2009
- With few words I have felt your profound pain. Keep writing!
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