Scars

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  • Jinsei
  • I haven't written anything for a while. Perhaps I should start again..

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I know you can't really call this poetry, but it is my style of writing, plus I'm getting back to it after a three year break from it, so just bare with me for a while.

Scars

Torn apart, a severed edge is pushed through the veins as a grey sky sends down a storm of blood from its fiery clouds. Incisions are left upon the skin and are soon shown. A constant struggle for belief in life, love, and joy force a new kind of peace formed by self-inflicting pain. The blood soaked blade tears a new hole in the hollow spirit revealing a path a different answer to a new question. A fight for a place and a reason to force new scars upon a cleansed soul tortures the mind rather quickly and forms a new scar on life itself. The body soon collapses to the ground as the sky calms. Everything around then fades from light to dark, finally soothing the spirit, sending it along with its scars into an eternal sleep.

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jess7693 commented on Scars

12-12-2011

i like your poem it had emotion, allot of dark poetry i read has no emotion

Jinsei

12/14/2011

Thanks. I'll get better eventually as well.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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