One Came Home

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    One Came Home

    A fluffy cloud

    Where angels sing,

    From up above

    The love he'll bring.

    A prayer was asked

    The message sent,

    From angels to God

    The message went.

    Days went by

    And then the years,

    Her heart would break

    And then more tears.

    Eight years would pass

    She felt alone,

    Little'd she know

    One would come home.

    Her heart was beating

    Her cry's were heard,

    She hung onto

    Their ever word

    She never let love go.

    One Came Home

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    StandingBear commented on One Came Home

    01-27-2011

    A well written, beautifully sad work relating the great inner spiritual strength in faith, *One Came Home* .. *From angels to God...the message went*... Great lines, great verse, great poem!
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    kdarcy commented on One Came Home

    07-21-2010

    Great little write, does make one wonder sometimes where the words go, are they even heard and can or will accept the answer given. We are likely where we are supposed to be, we may just always realize it. The answer we hope for is always a plus. Check out my write " Where Are You ". be well
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    Shadowwalker

    08/24/2010

    the answer came years later my friend but it still came and wow what a shock.

    Mareann commented on One Came Home

    01-02-2010

    Very lovely and heartfelt poem, i enjoyed this very much, thanks for sharing! Mary
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    Shadowwalker

    03/04/2010

    YVW enjoy sharing my work

    Rendida commented on One Came Home

    08-08-2009

    I feel God always answers my prayers but I never thought of writing about it... you did a beautiful job..
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    Shadowwalker

    08/10/2009

    I try to write most things down as it happens even if it is ten years later

    GentleT commented on One Came Home

    06-17-2009

    After a long wait for an answer to a prayer it is joy to receive an answer. If I understand he sent a spouse to travel life's road with that appreciates you. That would make the wait worth-wild.
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    Shadowwalker

    06/19/2009

    If only that were true.. It is of my oldest daughter who came home...... I waited so long and my prayers were finally answered

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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