Nocturnal Animals

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    Nocturnal Animals
    I brush past you on the street
    your perfume, so soft and sweet
    through a glance that was only fleeting
    I can feel your heart gently beating
    And despite all the things I want to say
    There can be only one sure way
    For you and I to be together
    For us to live for ever and ever
    So give yourself up to me
    and thru different eyes you shall see
    an existence never thought to be
    Of pain and death we are forever free
    but in order to have this life to live
    we must be willing to give
    our life, our love, our body and soul
    every part, the one, the whole
    I thirst only for you my love
    so let me surround you like a glove
    Give yourself up freely to me
    And forever, together, we will be.

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    teasasue commented on Nocturnal Animals

    09-21-2009

    this is a good poem I enjoyed the flow and the rhymes, and I am always up for a good vampire story, good job
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    Vampi

    10/21/2009

    Thank you so much for your comments. I'm glad you enjoy some of my work ... hopefully I will be able to get back to writing soon.

    Romano commented on Nocturnal Animals

    06-30-2009

    this is nice and beautiful and every bit of love with a forever dark glow that shines for all to se and know
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    beautifuldeath commented on Nocturnal Animals

    01-20-2009

    forever sounds wonderful in this piece.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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