Nipples Ring...

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    Nipples Ring...

     Headless in the motion of sheets
    Continuous figure in rhyme & beats
    Flowing over and over my skin
    As I dream and awake in the wind
    Soft your touch in the whisper around
    Loving my mind is a endless sound…
    Ghostly figure in my dreams again
    Kissing nipples in smoke filled rings
    The sound of a wet and tender tongue
    Washes my body and I desire to come…

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    danmartyjake1 commented on Nipples Ring...

    02-26-2010

    Extraordinary write. Short, intense, erotic, too. Great poem!
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    IzzyGumbo

    02/27/2010

    Thanks DanmArty! :)) Such a lovely comment, and I appreciate your reading time!

    dahlusion commented on Nipples Ring...

    02-26-2010

    "The sound of a wet and tender tongue Washes my body and I desire to come…" ---- you have spoken in a language here that has my attention. Steamy!
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    IzzyGumbo

    02/27/2010

    You make me blush. ;) glad you like!! xox

    hoth2o commented on Nipples Ring...

    01-21-2010

    Nice flow and content. Oh, to be that privileged tongue!!
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    IzzyGumbo

    01/21/2010

    blushes :) ty

    Hampton commented on Nipples Ring...

    11-11-2009

    I don't know what to say so I'll just nice rhyming
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    IzzyGumbo

    11/11/2009

    :) hugs Hampton, I'm not sure why you feel you need to say anything :) enjoy... or not, either way,I appreciate your eyes here. Thanks again friend. :)

    FranzJ commented on Nipples Ring...

    11-11-2009

    erotic indeed - nice wording - i like nipples too -
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    IzzyGumbo

    11/11/2009

    lol.. thanks Franz!

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