My HaikuSenryu?

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My HaikuSenryu?

My HaikuSenryu?
Who knew and what can I say.
I use all the ones. Anyway.

That's right and I know
Poetic say thoughts traditional
But what do I flow...

My HaikuSenryu
And I didn't even know
That the little words don't get used!

Did you say bless you?Awe.Chi you?
Know dang it I said my Haiku
Is a Senryu to spin you.Win you over
and delight you into flight straight and
true to a joy in the heart of a beating
artist. And yes...

:)

Yes to explain I say the U in the name
As a You and U too friend.Amen! :)
To Poets.Again Traditional blends and
the Wind creates new tapestry.
Sing a Song.Sang as One. In all ways.
Imaginable.And then sum.

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abbadejuju commented on My HaikuSenryu?

06-02-2009

Another masterpiece sis. Keep up the excellent writing! Brilliant escape of a typical format. Clever indeed!

IzzyGumbo

06/02/2009

Huggles you :) thank you my friend.

Bogdania commented on My HaikuSenryu?

06-02-2009

fresh rifs izzy - really like the haiku format - just 17 syllables to justify you're reason to write

IzzyGumbo

06/02/2009

I'm honored Bogdania, thank you for your kind comments and I look forward to reading your Art.filled writing as well. Thank you for your time to read here, I do appreciate it! And will return it. Hugs!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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