LOVE

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    • Jedi4Jesus
    • haven't been on the sight for awhile but had written a couple poems i'd like to invite everyone to read, What it's all about and You Promised

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    Written for a new beginning, a new chapter, a renewal. Amen

    LOVE

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    Do not awaken love the scriptures say to me
    Until it so desires; to set a heart that's captive-free
    A love expressed till nothings left 
    and emptied of thyself
    Is filling a void in someone else 
    instead of serving ones self
    There's nothing better than residual love
    A constant gift of giving
    To be the Love I want to see
    Makes living life worth living

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    carynontherhine commented on LOVE

    07-20-2010

    I like that captive-free heart! True love is an emotion emptying in to one's heart to fill a void. Or one would not be looking for love if it were already full. I like the poem. Explain the last part of nothing better than residual love a constant gift of giving, to the love I want to see makes living life worth living. Great heart filled poem!10,10!!
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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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