JODY’S AT THE BACK DOOR

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  • patricialouise
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Poem Commentary

Jody is a southern term for the one you comes in the back door when you are going out the front.

this one has a toon.

JODY’S AT THE BACK DOOR

            Jody’s  at the  back  door, 
            comin’  on  in                    

            He don’t see no harm;
            He don’t see no sin.                

            He don’t see  nutin’, 
            what’s right in front of him.              

            Girl,
            don’t cha know how you hurt me?

            Don’t cha know how I care?

            Best be tellin’ Jody,
            “Don’t be comin’ round here.”

 

           

            Jody’s at the back door,
            comin’ on in.

            He don’t see no harm.
            He don’t see no sin.

            He don’t see the trouble
            you’re getting’ him in.

            Girl, 
            don’t cha know how you hurt me?

            Don’t cha know how I care?

            If you’re still doin’ Jody, 
            you had betta beware.

 

            Jody’s at the back door,
            comin’ on in.

            He don’t see no harm. 
            He don’t see no sin.

            He don’t see no bullet, waitin’ for him.

           Girl,
           don’t cha know how you hurt me?

            Don’t cha know how I cared?

            I warned you about Jody,
            just how much I could bare.

 

            No Jody’s at the back door,
            comin’ on in.

            He don’t see no harm.
            He don’t see no sin.

            He don’t see nutin’,
            ever again.

            Girl, 
            don’t cha know how you hurt me?

            Don’t cha know how I cared?

            One last bullet,
            will end the whole affair.

 

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joshmandreza commented on JODY’S AT THE BACK DOOR

01-03-2013

Very unique! :-) I agree. This would make a Great Country Song.

Crush commented on JODY’S AT THE BACK DOOR

07-07-2009

this would be an absolutely wonderful country music song. i love the language and the flow of this masterpiece. wow, you keep the reader entertained throughout. thank you, this was very refreshing. a 10 from me.

Hampton commented on JODY’S AT THE BACK DOOR

07-01-2009

This is a dynamite poem full of clever phrases that tell a story about love scorned about as well as one could tell it.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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