It's Crazy

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    • ShanneN
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    It's Crazy

    This is more than love.
    I want nothing but you.
    Soon you will see my love,
    everything I say is true.

    This life is about you, and I.
    Us. together.
    Marriage. Children.
    It's real, It's us.

    "Nothing in this world could stop me from staring at you."
    because with you i could swing life away.
    I am in love with you, in every way.
    The ring, it's BEAUTIFUL!

    Your love, is beautiful.
    everything about you,
    I LOVE YOU.

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    countryboy1988 commented on It's Crazy

    12-30-2010

    you wrote as if you were speaking from your soul, the words describe a love that is so pure and true, its kinda as if its a fairy tale, i wish you the best of luck and happiness along the way
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    ShanneN

    12/30/2010

    Thank you, very much! :)

    danmartyjake1 commented on It's Crazy

    12-23-2010

    You captured a purity and an essence of young love within this poem that is so special and unique. Bravo!
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    HarverTomsson commented on It's Crazy

    12-23-2010

    Sweet, innocent, and brilliant with the light of hope. May your sun never go down. Harv
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    angelchaser commented on It's Crazy

    11-29-2010

    I couldn't be happier for you, Shannen:) May your life together know nothing but peace, love and happiness. *hugs*
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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