(((Inner Space)))

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    Some days are harder than others. Thank God for the best days. Hallelujah and again, Amen!

    (((Inner Space)))
    Darkest thoughts within my weary head…

    Filthy… “get up!” and “out of this bed!!”

    “I feel bad, so blue… so very sad

    Teary, wishing, praying to be glad


    “I don’t want to stay inside my self hate”

    Knowing this life is just not my fate,

    Wanna be rescued from this place

    Could I have fallen from God’s grace?


    If a change of mind would change my heart

    Then stop asking, “this world to depart!”

    Medicines go down harder each day

    There has to be another, better way!


    Please, pray longer and louder for me?

    “Sinking lower still, God, can’t you see?!”

    “I think You do, but show me You care,

    Won’t you pick me up and hold me there?”

     

    ©Zep 2010

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    Hampton commented on (((Inner Space)))

    02-08-2010

    Painfull but still inspirational in its pleadings to the almighty for relief and shelter from life's many challemges. Well done
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    Zep

    02/08/2010

    O MY !! From you great poet, how very kind of you to read and comment on my poem. I'm grateful, thank you! Ivy

    icu2 commented on (((Inner Space)))

    02-08-2010

    The poet really gives the reader a clear visual of where she is, at this time. Or, it could just be a well written poem about something out of the air...either way............it's very good.
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    Zep

    02/08/2010

    Wow, yes this was over a period of darkened shrouds encasing me. I have won that battle, along with the help of our Almighty, that is. :D Thank you for your time and compliments.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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