In The dark

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    In The dark

    Why is it I feel like I am in the dark?
    Is it because people don't want to tell me why?
    Is it because they don't want to worry me?
    Is it beacuse they are hidding from me?
    So I plead with you, please!
    Who knows why I am in the dark?
    Who will ever know, why???

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    LenaM commented on In The dark

    12-13-2010

    I like this sunshine and maybe it's because I insist on being told the truth of things no matter how ugly something may be . When my daughter got cancer I begged the doctors to always be upfront with me I feared being in the dark more than I feared knowing what was going to happen, This appeals to me on so many levels excellent write
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    knight4696 commented on In The dark

    10-04-2010

    Sunshine - Another very interesting write. A question I think we all have .. It all depends on ones perspective of things Why? I don't think any of us really know the answer to this .. but what's more important is that you have someone to help guide you into the light. :) Ken
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    sunshine33710

    10/06/2010

    Thank you Ken for the comment. That is so true Ken!

    RPT40 commented on In The dark

    09-08-2010

    I like the angles in this poem. You can interpret this in a few different ways, and each works well. Nice job.
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    sunshine33710

    09/17/2010

    Thank you for the comment RPT40!

    sandro007 commented on In The dark

    08-30-2010

    a lot of people are in the dark... the important thing is to have someone to help us get out...
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    sunshine33710

    09/17/2010

    Thank you for the comment sandro!

    candygirl34 commented on In The dark

    08-30-2010

    seems like we are always in the dark until a hand pulls us up into the light
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    sunshine33710

    08/30/2010

    Thank you for the comment Candy. That is so true.

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