A walk on the beach

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    A walk on the beach

     As I walk along the beach,
    I feel the wind through my hair and face,
    I hear the crashing of the waves along the shore.

    As I keep walking along I see the stars,
    Glowing in the sky like brightly lite candles,
    As I walk along the beach,
    I am thinking about the love we share.
    How I fell in love with you,
    How I took the dare.

    I think of how my heart holds you deeply,
    How I will forever and always care.

    I know I will have you for a lifetime,
    A life time of walks on the beach...


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    Luwonda commented on A walk on the beach

    01-07-2011

    Beautiful poem! I love the way you describe the love song, the crashing waves and the stars as candles. A lovely simile, I make it one of my favorites.
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    REGINA2 commented on A walk on the beach

    10-27-2010

    This is a beautiful poem, sunshine. You are very fortunate to have found that love. I once did but lost it.
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    sunshine33710

    10/27/2010

    Thank you for the comment Ragina. We do alot of walks on the beach at night.

    knight4696 commented on A walk on the beach

    10-04-2010

    Sunshine - This is a very romantic write. Nothing like taking a walk on the beach with a loved-one. :) Great job! :) Ken
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    sunshine33710

    10/06/2010

    Thank you Ken for the wonderful comment. We just went for a walk on the beach last night.

    Chandie commented on A walk on the beach

    09-30-2010

    good job really like it keep it up...... lasting motivating love
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    sunshine33710

    10/06/2010

    Thank you chandice for the comment.

    Kristina commented on A walk on the beach

    09-24-2010

    Really good write... I love this one... keep it up. Luv ya
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    sunshine33710

    09/24/2010

    Thank you for the comment Kristina. we take plenty of walks on the beach as a stress releafe. Luv ya too.

    sunshine33710

    09/26/2010

    Thank you Kristina for the comment. We like to take alot of walks on the beach. We like to talk about our problems at the beach. Luv ya too girl!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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